Hello :)

I have been wondering about this for a few months now, which one of these both are best to use for the beginning of my game..

This is just a sample map from MZ with just small change in it.

I made this one based on the default style but i feel like it is missing something ...there are no sideview boards and such.

And i am also trying to put capital letter at the beginning of each sentences...and the... dot at the end, It will not solve every mistake i can make but it might reduce complains about my writing.

Happy sunday everyone !